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writefiction ([personal profile] writefiction) wrote2009-01-23 01:33 am

Something I wrote.....

It's sorta, kinda a song. Don't be too harsh.

YOU KISSED ME
By: Amanda C. Watson ©

You kissed me, and then said you're sorry
You kissed me, and I sat and stared while your eyes filled with tears
And when you kissed me, you said you'd ruined everything
But when you kissed me, I took your hand and said it would be alright

[chorus] So don't turn out the light
I've been in the dark too long now
I was too blind to see
You were there in front of me
The guiding light to my future.....
Our future.......
Now I don't have to walk alone

Who knew a kiss could free you?
Just stole my heart from it's cold confines
But when you kissed me, my heart melted from the heat of your light

[chorus]
So don't turn out the light
I've been in the dark for too long now
I was too blind to see
You were there in front of me
The guiding light to my future ...
Our future...
Now I don't have to walk alone

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[identity profile] lire-casander.livejournal.com 2009-01-23 07:26 am (UTC)(link)
I think it's good. Any chance that we might listen to it with its music and everything? I think it's a ballad, but you can always prove me wrong.