10 Things.....

[writefiction]

So I thought since I posted that last post with the "7 Things" lyrics and made the comment of how it sounded like a poem I wrote, I thought I'd post my poem. (hullow run on sentence! commas are my best friends) And really, they don't sound alike necessarily, they're just alike b/c they're kind of....I guess about the same thing. Whatev. Just read.


10 Things I Hate About (i'd prefer not to say)
by: amanda: jaclyn's TWIN sister

i hate the way you got married in secret
i hate the way you pick and choose
i hate the way you make me feel so many emotions
i hate the way you tie your shoes
i hate the way you make me laugh
i hate it more when you make me cry
i hate the way you make me smile
i hate the way you make me high
i hate the way you take too long
and when everything's said and done,
i hate the most that i don't hate you
i even love you some



when I read this and think about who it's about, I feel like such a goober. *headdesk*