Writing Table Prompt #095: unsaid
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writefictionTitle/Chapter: Unsaid (drabble)
Author: amanda: jaclyn's twin sister
Pairing: your choice
Rating: there's one eff word, but pretty much rated G
Prompt Number: #095: unsaid
My Table
WRITING PROMPT #095: unsaid
The things I've left unsaid have ruined my life.
When he said, Stay, all I wanted was to take my bags back to our room and stay. Stay for forever. But I didn't say anything. I just walked away.
When he said, I love you, I didn't say it back. It was there on the tip of my tongue, but it didn't leave my lips.
When he said, I'm tired of this. It's not working anymore, I told him to get the fuck out. I didn't mean it. I wanted him to stay. I wanted to tell him I loved him and I'd try harder. But I didn't.
When he told me he was engaged, I shook his hand and said congratulations. What I really wanted to tell him was that he was making the biggest mistake of his life. I wanted to tell him that I never stopped loving him. That it should be me wearing that engagement ring. But I didn't. I faked a smile and pretended to be happy for him while on the inside I was dying.
I held everything in. I left the most important things unsaid. I lost my soulmate, my better half. In the end, it ruined my life.
[fin.]
Comments?
Author: amanda: jaclyn's twin sister
Pairing: your choice
Rating: there's one eff word, but pretty much rated G
Prompt Number: #095: unsaid
My Table
WRITING PROMPT #095: unsaid
The things I've left unsaid have ruined my life.
When he said, Stay, all I wanted was to take my bags back to our room and stay. Stay for forever. But I didn't say anything. I just walked away.
When he said, I love you, I didn't say it back. It was there on the tip of my tongue, but it didn't leave my lips.
When he said, I'm tired of this. It's not working anymore, I told him to get the fuck out. I didn't mean it. I wanted him to stay. I wanted to tell him I loved him and I'd try harder. But I didn't.
When he told me he was engaged, I shook his hand and said congratulations. What I really wanted to tell him was that he was making the biggest mistake of his life. I wanted to tell him that I never stopped loving him. That it should be me wearing that engagement ring. But I didn't. I faked a smile and pretended to be happy for him while on the inside I was dying.
I held everything in. I left the most important things unsaid. I lost my soulmate, my better half. In the end, it ruined my life.
[fin.]
Comments?
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Date: March 19th, 2009 08:01 pm (UTC)Oh and btw, did you ever check out my last drabble feat. Hanson and Tokio Hotel? I know you like both of those bands so I really wanted to know what you thought of it. I don't have too many TH fans on my FList. Heh. Thanks in advance!
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Date: March 19th, 2009 08:53 pm (UTC)And yes, I just checked it out and left you a comment. But I'll tell you here anyway: SO GOOD! hehe
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Date: March 19th, 2009 08:59 pm (UTC)