Jul. 18th, 2008

writefiction: (Piano Hands)
This sounds awfully like a poem I wrote when I was 17.....except it was ten things, not seven.



7 Things

by Miley Cyrus

i probably shouldn't say this
but at times i get so scared
when i think about the previous
relationship we've shared
it was awesome but we lost it
it's not possible for me not to care
now we're standing in the rain
but nothin's ever gonna change until
you hear, my dear

the seven things i hate about you
the seven things i hate about you
you're vain, your games,
you're insecure
you love me, you like her
you make me laugh, you make me cry
i don't know which side to buy
your friends, they're jerks
when you act like them,
just know it hurts
i wanna be with the one i know
and the seventh thing i hate the
most that you do
you make me love you

it's awkward and it's silent
as i wait for you to say
what i need to hear now
your sincere apology
when you mean it, i'll believe it
if you txt it, i'll delete it
let's be clear
oh i'm not coming back
you're taking seven steps here

the seven things i hate about you
the seven things i hate about you
you're vain, your games,
you're insecure
you love me, you like her
you make me laugh, you make me cry
i don't know which side to buy
your friends, they're jerks
when you act like them,
just know it hurts
i wanna be with the one i know
and the seventh thing i hate the
most that you do
you make me love you

compared to all the great things
that would take too long to write
i probably should mention
the seven that i like.....

the seven things i like about you
your hair, your eyes, your old levi's
and when we kiss, i'm hypnotized
you make me laugh, you make me cry
but i guess that's both
i'll have to buy
your hand in mine
when we're intertwined
everything's alright
i wanna be with the one i know
and the seventh thing i like the
most that you do
you make me love you, you do
writefiction: (dear heart)
So I thought since I posted that last post with the "7 Things" lyrics and made the comment of how it sounded like a poem I wrote, I thought I'd post my poem. (hullow run on sentence! commas are my best friends) And really, they don't sound alike necessarily, they're just alike b/c they're kind of....I guess about the same thing. Whatev. Just read.


10 Things I Hate About (i'd prefer not to say)
by: amanda: jaclyn's TWIN sister

i hate the way you got married in secret
i hate the way you pick and choose
i hate the way you make me feel so many emotions
i hate the way you tie your shoes
i hate the way you make me laugh
i hate it more when you make me cry
i hate the way you make me smile
i hate the way you make me high
i hate the way you take too long
and when everything's said and done,
i hate the most that i don't hate you
i even love you some



when I read this and think about who it's about, I feel like such a goober. *headdesk*

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