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Title/Chapter: Breaking Free (33/?)
Author: amanda: jaclyn's twin sister
Pairing: Zaylor Hanson
Rating: NC-17
Notes: AU-ish. No wives, no kids. They still live in Tulsa. And the story starts in May 2003.
Summary: Typical Zaylor fic
Previous Chapters

Dedication: to [livejournal.com profile] yrmlcompleted b/c I don't think I've seen someone comment on so many chapters at once! lol



CHAPTER THIRTY-THREE

Taylor's POV


I feel so fucking complete; emotionally, physically, spiritually. Laying in the leaves, in the grass, my younger brother's cock buried in my ass, completes me. It fills my heart and soul with so much joy and love. But try as I might, I can't hold back the tears.

Zac's face pales.

"Oh my god! Taylor, are you okay?! Am I hurting you?! You have to tell me if I'm hurting you!" He sounds panicked.

I shake my head.

"No, no, no. I'm fine," I assure him. He wipes gently at my tears. "It's just... I've waited so long for this and I love you so much." My brother presses his lips to my forehead for a few seconds.

"I love you too," he murmurs. Then he kisses me so gently it takes my breath away.

"Move," I mumble, lifting my hips to his.

Zac chuckles quietly, pulling his hips back slowly and gently. I moan as he pushes in, in just the same way.

"Oh, Tay," he murmurs, ghosting kisses over my jaw and neck. His steady thrusts slowly fill me with an immense pleasure, my eyes closing automatically. I grip his shoulders and neck, clinging to him, keeping him close.

As Zac's pace quickens, we moan and grunt and whimper, the sounds all blending together in perfect harmony. My hips lift to Zac's, picking up his rhythm quickly so our bodies now dance to the same sexual beat. And if I had thought that my lover and I fit together perfectly before, now I know we do. This completes me. Zac completes me. He's all I need to be happy.

Our hips speed up as we climb closer to the edge. I spread my thighs more and Zac thrusts in, sinking deeper than before. I whimper loudly in my brother's ear, earning a groan from him.

I squeeze Zac tightly to me, our stomachs creating friction on my throbbing cock. I moan and arch into him, squeezing tighter.

"I love you," I whimper.

"I love you too, baby," Zac pants in my ear. And before I know what's happening, bright white stars burst behind my eyelids and I'm crying out in pleasure, releasing the evidence of said pleasure between our bodies. Zac screams my name into my shoulder at the same time, filling me with his warm seed.

Our hips keep moving through our simultaneous orgasms. Panting, I place random kisses all over my lover's face.

"I love you," I murmur. "I love you so much." Then I bury my face in his neck and cry.

Zac gently slips from between my legs and lays down on his back, pulling me close. I, once again, hide my face in his neck, still crying. My boyfriend strokes my hair and rubs my back.

"Are you okay?" Zac asks quietly after a moment. I sigh and pull my head back to look at him.

"I'm fine," I whisper. "It's just... that was so perfect. More perfect than I could have ever imagined. I love you, Baby."

Zac smiles at me sweetly.

"I love you too, Princess, so much," he says. I'm not offended at his use of "Princess" now that he's got his body wrapped around me. After we cuddle for a bit, we reluctantly decide to get dressed again before anyone notices our nakedness.

Once I've got all my clothes back on, Zac grabs my pant leg and pulls me down next to him in the leaves, making me giggle. I roll on to my side to face him with a wide smile. He's laid on his side, propped on his elbow, smiling at me. I scoot closer to him and rub my nose against his.

"I love you," I whisper quietly.

"I love you too," Zac replies.

I move closer to my brother, snuggling into his chest. His strong arms wrap around me tightly. I sigh and close my eyes, enjoying the warmth radiating from the soul next to me.

We lay in silence for quite a while before Zac speaks up.

"Whatta ya thinkin' 'bout?" he asks, stroking my hair. I shrug.

"I was just thinking how much I like this place, this neighborhood. I was thinking we should move here," I tell him.

"But, Tay," Zac whines. "We haven't even been in our apartment for two whole months yet!" He seems a little exasperated.

"Well I wasn't planning on moving right this second," I retort. Zac looks at me curiously.

"What did you have in mind?"

I move on to my stomach, propped on my elbows and play with the fallen leaves. I stare down at the red leaf I'm holding, not wanting to look at my brother.

"Well, I thought we'd get married first," I say quietly.

"Married?" Zac asks, raising an eyebrow.

"Yeah, married," I confirm.

"But I thought we couldn't."

I shake my hair from my eyes and look at my brother.

"That doesn't matter," I tell him. "Whether it's legal or not, marriage just means you're committing yourself to this relationship for life. In sickness and in health, for rich or for poor, till death do us part."

I look into Zac's warm brown eyes and touch his cheek gently.

"It doesn't have to be legal to be real. As long as we say vows that we mean, the legality issues don't matter."

Zac just stares at me for a moment. Then he asks,

"What else are you planning?"

"I plan to have it all," I answer with a grin. "The perfect marriage with the four bedroom house and the huge yard with the white picket fence and the two kids and three dogs."

Zac doesn't look shocked; more than anything he looks surprised.

"You seriously want all that?" he asks. I nod, biting my lip shyly. "When did this all come about?"

"When we were apart," I whisper almost sadly. "While we were uh, separated, I realized you're it for me. You're all I need to be truly happy. I wanna grow old with you, Zac."



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Date: April 25th, 2008 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lovesparked.livejournal.com
SO cuute!!
omfg, i love them.

Date: May 26th, 2008 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ifyouwannago07.livejournal.com
Aww,I'm so happy.

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